Thursday, September 9, 2010

A Good Lede vs. a Bad Lede

A bad lede:
A last-quarter scoring spree by Connie Hawkins, the newly arrived forward, enabled the Bullets to erase a seemingly insurmountable 22-point halftime lead by the Warriors in a come-from-behind win, 88-87.

A good lede:
Newly arrived forward Connie Hawkins fourth-quarter scoring spree led the Bullets to an 88-87 come-from-behind victory against the Warriors.

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