Thursday, September 9, 2010

A Good Lede vs. a Bad Lede

A bad lede:
A last-quarter scoring spree by Connie Hawkins, the newly arrived forward, enabled the Bullets to erase a seemingly insurmountable 22-point halftime lead by the Warriors in a come-from-behind win, 88-87.

A good lede:
Newly arrived forward Connie Hawkins fourth-quarter scoring spree led the Bullets to an 88-87 come-from-behind victory against the Warriors.

Friday, September 3, 2010

Well-writen Article

The article that I chose was from the NY Times. It talks about the number of homicides occurring in Venezuela. I think it is a well-written article because it starts with a provocative statement, which hooks the reader. Also, in the second paragraph the article answers the questions who, what, when, where, and why right after the catchy statement.

This article also gives the reader details of the problem occurred in Venezuela. It includes quotes from people that the reporter interviewed. He writes in the third person. And I feel that he is objective. He never states his opinion.

On the last paragraph the reporter ends with a very shocking quote, “We elected him to crack down on the problems we face, but there’s no control of criminals on the street, no control of anything.” This quote makes a perfect ending of the article because, in a way, it summarizes what the writer reported.

The link to this article is: http://www.nytimes.com/2010/08/23/world/americas/23venez.html?pagewanted=2&ref=americas